Hello Readers,
I guess I have never written this kind of writeup since the day I started writing. I hope I do some justice to it. Do give me your honest feedbacks.
A shayari popped up in my head :
ankahe dhaagon mei baandh gya koi
ki vo saath bhi nhi
or hum azaad bhi nahi
P.S- I lost a loved one and maybe that made me write what I never wrote before. I miss you Madhu Aunty. I know you will never be back but you are around us and giving us all those hints in those forms. I can feel you and yes, we all are trying to be okay. We miss you badly. Love you so much.. May your soul Rest in Peace!
Author’s Note: This story got published by Book Array in their book Frozen Emotions. Due to copyright issues, this story has been removed. To read the story Pre-order the Book:
http://www.amazon.in/dp/8193298705/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1482127892&sr=8-1&keywords=Frozen+Emotions
Oh my God…this is scary truly…to imagine oneself in such a state requires a very high level of dunno what…
thats true!
No words to explain my reaction….
Stories like this can make a person speechless!
Heart stirring!
thanx dear..!!
Very stark, in your face kind of writteng. Nicely done.
Thanx a tonne maam.. it means a world coming from you ..:)
Jab apna koi chala jatta hi tu Dil hame kuch likhine ko kihta hi tab hi men halka ho jatta hi….very nic written…beta ji….
thankyou Papa..
It’s just beautiful:-)
No vocabulary is there to describe the of the incident.Those killing words,’ may your soul rest in peace’ will force you to read the story again after you complete it.
The screen playing of the characters, the originality of the plot and the way how death and life are contrasted is just brilliant.
Kudos to you surbhi sarren:-)
thankyou so mcuh..:)
May God give you strength Surbhi. I know what you are going through.
thanx for understanding me .. trust me.. it means a world to me..!!
Very well written n that too from d depth of heart. But there cn be another version of it too. Madhu ji might be highly peaceful at d time of her death…she perhaps was relaxed as she was sure that her job on earth is accomplished..she has nurtured n nourished her near n extended family to d best of her abilities. She is sure that d family will always be bound by d values that she has taught them. She finished her journey on earth but has gone on another journey which perhaps is better than d present one. Perhaps she is so close to d almighty that she has attained eternal bliss….which is d ultimate aim of any soul
I am glad that you dropped by and gave your version about it.. but what I interpreted is the real life story that happened in my life.. and what I could feel I wrote that n it was not a story for me but a tribute where I can make her alive and this post has made her alive again..
Very poignant.
thankyou so much maam..:)